Ancient Civilizations: Lost & Found

It was suppose to be one of my entry to the challenge "Ancient Civilizations: Lost & Found".
The theme: bring to life a bygone civilization.
My story:
In the time of Pharaoh they used to build the temples of their gods across the Nile River, it was a prosperous time with a lots of boats going up and down the Nile to trade and give offering to the gods which resulted in a lot of common people living across the banks of the Nile to trade and serve the gods.

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